{"id":1945,"date":"2019-01-16T21:56:48","date_gmt":"2019-01-17T05:56:48","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/ideajones.com\/?p=1945"},"modified":"2019-02-14T12:13:14","modified_gmt":"2019-02-14T20:13:14","slug":"a-cinematic-book","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/ideajones.com\/?p=1945","title":{"rendered":"A Cinematic Book"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>We made the quarterfinals of the<strong> ScreenCraft Cinematic Book Competition!<em> (Update&#8230; we made the semifinals!)<\/em><\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image\"><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"353\" height=\"353\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/ideajones.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/02\/Celebrate-IdeaJones.jpg?resize=353%2C353&#038;ssl=1\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-2035\" srcset=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/ideajones.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/02\/Celebrate-IdeaJones.jpg?w=353&amp;ssl=1 353w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/ideajones.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/02\/Celebrate-IdeaJones.jpg?resize=150%2C150&amp;ssl=1 150w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/ideajones.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/02\/Celebrate-IdeaJones.jpg?resize=300%2C300&amp;ssl=1 300w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 353px) 100vw, 353px\" \/><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<p> Just got the word that we made the semifinals of ScreenCraft&#8217;s competition for &#8220;cinematic&#8221; books, which means script readers could see this as a movie. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>There are a lot of great books that wouldn&#8217;t make good movies. To be made into a movie, a book needs a visual language. Long ago, we took a series of classes from Dale Wasserman, who wrote the play &#8220;Man of La Mancha.&#8221; He wrote the &#8220;book&#8221; of the play (as opposed to the music and lyrics &#8212; although he maintained some of the lyrics were lifted from his text). He also wrote for film and tv as well as theater. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>He said that books are the most literate art form, then plays, then film, then tv. It wasn&#8217;t an insult &#8212; it&#8217;s just that film and tv are more dependent on visuals than language. Language matters in film and tv, but first, you have to have pictures.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Mark and I have placed in screenwriting contests, and Mark writes in pictures. He&#8217;s good about prodding me to look at what I&#8217;m writing and think about what it looks like. &#8220;It&#8217;s a movie in the reader&#8217;s head,&#8221; he told me one time. &#8220;When I read, I see it and hear it.&#8221;   Plus, he trained me in producing for radio, where creating mental pictures is what it&#8217;s all about. It&#8217;s something I still work on&#8230; as you can tell, I tend to be verbal. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Lots of writing is you alone with your thoughts and your computer (or notebook, or&#8230;). I talk to myself when I&#8217;m writing, wondering if anyone but me will understand what I&#8217;m trying to convey. There&#8217;s no way to tell until someone reads it. First we had beta readers, then did live readings, then got feedback from a reviewer, and at every stage, examined what was working and what wasn&#8217;t.   Every time a reader says they enjoyed it, and tells me what connected with them, I want to cheer.  Now we&#8217;re querying it. It&#8217;s a terrifying process.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p> I overwrite, then have to cut like the villain in a slasher film.  There&#8217;s always a struggle to cut what is &#8220;extra&#8221; without taking all the juice out of it.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>To know that the ScreenCraft readers, who have never met me and don&#8217;t know what I sound like, &#8220;hear&#8221; and &#8220;see&#8221; this novel is a joy.  Congratulations to my fellow semifinalists, and to everyone who completed a novel they were proud enough of to enter it in a competition &#8212; that&#8217;s a big achievement right there.<br><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>We made the quarterfinals of the ScreenCraft Cinematic Book Competition! (Update&#8230; we made the semifinals!) Just got the word that we made the semifinals of ScreenCraft&#8217;s competition for &#8220;cinematic&#8221; books, which means script readers could see this as a movie. &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/ideajones.com\/?p=1945\">Continue reading <span class=\"meta-nav\">&rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":2034,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":""},"categories":[398,15,1,460,459],"tags":[532,527,432,521,441,397,401,511,420,46,47,385,522,34,38,388,389,524,408,73],"class_list":["post-1945","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-boats","category-books","category-uncategorized","category-writer-life","category-writing","tag-amquerying","tag-amwriting","tag-authorlife","tag-joey","tag-joeyjones","tag-rats","tag-writerlife","tag-writing-2","tag-writinglife","tag-author","tag-authors","tag-boats","tag-creative-writing","tag-ideajones","tag-jones","tag-novel","tag-novels","tag-screencraft","tag-writer-life","tag-writing"],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/ideajones.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/01\/Celebrate-IdeaJones.jpg?fit=353%2C353&ssl=1","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/ideajones.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1945","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/ideajones.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/ideajones.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/ideajones.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/ideajones.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=1945"}],"version-history":[{"count":4,"href":"https:\/\/ideajones.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1945\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":2036,"href":"https:\/\/ideajones.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1945\/revisions\/2036"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/ideajones.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/media\/2034"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/ideajones.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=1945"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/ideajones.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=1945"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/ideajones.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=1945"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}